Man on the Side

Hey, how's it going? This was enjoyable to read and I think you expressed yourself clearly with this. Just follow the basic sentence pattern, okay? Capitalised letters on the beginning ...

Um, you might want to put some spaces between stanzas because it's a bit hard to read. Other than that, well it was okay as far as the message of ...

Swimming takes courage for when we swim we go to a place where we're not really meant to- the waters. When we go for a dive, we try to store ...

This poem reminds me of this quote from Ani Difranco, “Some people wear their smile like a disguise. Those people who smile a lot, watch their eyes. I know because ...